This is the first draft for our mockumentary "Why Did Ben Collins Die?". The script still needs improvements, such as expanding a few scenes, adding more dialogue, writing out thr actual content of some of the title cards, correcting grammatical mistakes and making certain pieces of dialogue more convincing for example in Scene 2, Charlotte's sudden rant on why she actually dated Ben is a bit sudden and should be paced more carefully.
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