Thursday, 3 May 2012
3) WHAT HAVE YOU LEARNED FROM YOUR AUDIENCE FEEDBACK?
From our audience feedback, we
have learnt that people found it hard at the beginning to understand
weather the mockumentary was supposed to be real or believable. They
didn’t necessarily understand what was going on and they found this a
little confusing. They said that the title cards helped with this, yet
these title cards were hard to see as the writing was quite small.
"I liked the way it changed in the middle." - Focus Group Member
None
of the focus group said they had witnessed this kind of situation
themselves and they didn’t realize that it was such an issue among
teenagers and they thought that this mockumentary helped them and would
help other people to realize the dangers. The majority of the focus
group were aged between 17 and 18 but we had one teacher, this pretty
much matcyhed our target audience.
"Not very realistic but it made sense within the given genre" - Focus Group Member
Charlotte’s
character reminded a lot of the focus group of an American teenager
which made them feel like our mockumentary was similar to an American
teen movie. The focus group didn’t say that they wanted to know what happened later on, as they didn’t feel that there was a later on.
"It was very informative." - Focus Group Member
The
last question, people had a mixed feeling about. Some said that if a
drug results in death then it isn’t for a good or legit reason and
therefore it is just as bad as other drugs. On
the whole people enjoyed our film and were impressed with it, they
thought that more time would have resulted in maybe a better production
but the enjoyed it. In general comments, people said that it looked like a real documentary and was very professional looking.
Wednesday, 2 May 2012
2) HOW EFFECTIVE IS THE COMBINATION OF YOUR MAIN PRODUCT AND ANCILlARY TEXTS?
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Our movie poster targeted teenagers. We used an independent style that appealed to the niche audience that we tried to attract. We used a de-saturated image which connoted the nostalgic and independent style we wear aiming for. The poster revealed the main subject of our film, Ben Collins, the boy who died and the title of the movie, ‘Why did Ben Collins die?’ A name that catches your eye and summarizes what the mocumentary is all about. We made a double page spread for a magazine, featuring an interview with us, the directors, and a summary of the mocumentary. This was similar to the two art house magazines, ‘Little White Lies’ and ‘Sight and Sound’. Both magazines targeted a certain niche audience similar to the one that we wanted to attract to our mocumentary. We consciously decided not to use successful actors as we didn’t want the audience to be detracted from the films verisimilitude. Therefore the magazine article focuses more on us, the directors of the mocumentary and our motivations and reasons for the film.
1) IN WHAT WAYS DOES YOUR MEDIA PRODUCTS USE, DEVELOP OR CHALLENGE FORMS AND CONVENTIONS OF REAL MEDIA PRODUCTS
We consciously choose not to use Voice Over’s in our Mockumentary
as we felt like it would alter and influence the reading of our media text and
create a passive Media audiences rather than a active one. Therfore, instead of Voice Over, we used Title Cards to explain certain events that happened off-screen.
Two of our Title Cards; used instead of Voice Overs to explain off-screen plot points.
Our whole project as
a whole encourages a more active media reading. Our genre for example, a
mockumentary, usually “mocks” a certain topic, mockumentaries aren’t meant to
be taken serious mostly but ours is. That is due to us not specifically wanting
to do a mockumentary. Our main ambition was to create a hybrid of two media
genres. Teen Movies and Documentaries. The Mise-En Scene within our Mockumentary heavily references
the general conventions of Documentaries and the way they are shot. We used Talking
Heads for the individual interviews with the various characters and used
subtitles to annotate the shots, revealing the characters name and their
profession.
Example of Annotations and Subtitles used in Talking Heads of our characters.
In order for the interviews to not get visually boring, we decided to use reaction shots and noddies of the interviewer in order to make the on-screen happenings seem more alive and quick. This makes it easier for the audience not to lose interest and keep paying attention.
Example of Reaction Shots of the Interviewer during the Interviews
At several instances we used Handheld to create a feeling of
everything happening in the moment, making our mockumentary seem more real as
opposed to staged and scripted. For Example, the scene where we interview the
character “Charlotte” takes a surprising
twist when she receives a text and storms out the room. The camera switches to
handheld and follows her out the room for quite some time when finally, it is
shut down by the angry character. This makes everything seem more real and
believable.
Example of the camera switching from tripod to handheld, chasing one of the characters.
The American documentary “American Teen” features similar technical
aspects that are often present in this genre. The movie often uses a Handheld
camera following the various characters. Vox Pop and Talking Heads are also a
recurring technical stylistic device.
Example of Reaction Shots of the Interviewer during the Interviews
Tuesday, 1 May 2012
Friday, 27 April 2012
Thursday, 26 April 2012
FEEDBACK QUESTIONAIRE
1. Did you think the way the documentary was made is believable and realistic?
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2. Have you witnessed similar situations yourself during your school time?
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3. How old are you?
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4. How realistic was the representation of Charlotte’s character?
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5. Did you enjoy it?
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6. Do you want to know what happened later on?
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7. Did the film raise awareness on the matter of ADHD?
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8. How far do you agree with Tom’s statement that drug abuse can be justified by a good enough reason?
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Thursday, 12 April 2012
WHATEVER HAPPENED TO BEN COLLINS - FINAL VERSION
The editing process is complete and this is the final version of our mockumentary "Why Did Ben Collins Die". We are very pleased with the outcome of our movie and appreciate the variety on things we learned creating it.
Saturday, 3 March 2012
ROUGH CUT (+ ANALYSIS)
• Spelling mistakes in text • Change font of titles and add in some • Music at opening and ending of film • Add fade ins and outs • Titles • Add in mother scene Having seen the film for the first time, I think that it will appeal to our target audience a great deal and although it is a mocumentary it could be seen as quite emotional. There are still a lot of alterations to be made but so far I am pleased with what we have done. The timing exceeds the guidance so we shall examine what can be cut and try and do that. There are a few small mistakes, such as spellings but that can easily be changed. We are planning on going on Sound Cloud and other similar websites to find appropriate music the opening and ending of the film. This will help with the atmosphere of the film and should be a good finishing touch. We have yet to film the last scene of the Mother talking to the reporters and that should conclude the film nicely.
Friday, 2 March 2012
Wednesday, 29 February 2012
Tuesday, 28 February 2012
FINAL MOVIE POSTER
This is our final version of our poster for the movie "Why Did Ben Collins Have To Die"
Poster Final
Poster Final
FINAL MAGAZINE SPREAD
T his is our final and finished version of the magazine spread/interview on our movie "Why Did Ben Collins Die?"
Finished Magazine Spread
Finished Magazine Spread
Tuesday, 7 February 2012
OUR MOVIE POSTER (UNFINISHED)
After having done our poster mock-up awhile back and having shot our pictures for the poster, we were finally able to edit the final version of the poster. Mostly, we are happy with how the poster turned out although we are going to have a few adjustments, such as possibly changing the position of the image and changing the credits at the bottom of the poster. As of now, we used a template out the internet which looks quite out of place. Other than that, we are happy how the poster turned out. At the moment, we have two versions but we are most likely to use the more saturated version (the one on the left), with him looking to the side.
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Thursday, 2 February 2012
POSTER IMAGE - EDITING PROCESS
After choosing our favourite shots in Adobe Bridge, we tried various ways of editing them in Adobe Photoshop. We used two different pictures one of our actor facing the camera and one of him looking away. Both are shot in a yearbook-esque way.
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TUTORIAL: WHAT WE DID IN PHOTOSHOP
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TUTORIAL: WHAT WE DID IN PHOTOSHOP
We used various tools to edit the two images. We started by using the "Levels" tool in order to adjust the lightness and contrast of the image and then used the "Exposure" tool to soften the image and create a rather old style.
We procceded by adding a texture over the image to add a bit of noise, again, to make the picture look a bit older. We then played around with the "greyscale" and the "Hue &saturation" tool having to final versions to choose from. The Black & White version and the slightly saturated version.
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For the second image, we choose a similiar editing style. We again, worked with the "Levels" tool to adjust the Lighting and the Contrast of the image and also altered the "Exposure" settings in order for the image to soften.
Then, just like with the first image, we added the same texture and put it's oppacity down in order for it to only slightly affect the image. We finished by using the "Hue & Saturation" tool.
Tuesday, 31 January 2012
MAGAZINE SPREAD - BASIC LAYOUT
Finally, we designed the actual magazine spread in InDesgin. Important Note: The actual Text is not done but the pictures and the layouts are.
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TUTORIAL: WHAT WE DID IN PHOTOSHOP
We started by pressing Ctrl + D to insert Christabels Portrait. Originally we were thinking to put both our portraits in but we thought the layout looked much more interesting with the emphasis on one of us. We then inserted an image of us during the interview on the second page, much smaller, but making clear that this is an interview.
We then proceeded to add some text using the "Placeholder"-text tool. We arranged them and decided where the text would look the best. We also added a subtitle for the actual title "Why Did Ben Collins Die" making it look much more neat and less empty and spacy. As the background colour for the two pages are different we decided to highlight this in the colour of the heading aswell, something we first saw in the magazine "Little White Lies"
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TUTORIAL: WHAT WE DID IN PHOTOSHOP
We started by pressing Ctrl + D to insert Christabels Portrait. Originally we were thinking to put both our portraits in but we thought the layout looked much more interesting with the emphasis on one of us. We then inserted an image of us during the interview on the second page, much smaller, but making clear that this is an interview.
We then proceeded to add some text using the "Placeholder"-text tool. We arranged them and decided where the text would look the best. We also added a subtitle for the actual title "Why Did Ben Collins Die" making it look much more neat and less empty and spacy. As the background colour for the two pages are different we decided to highlight this in the colour of the heading aswell, something we first saw in the magazine "Little White Lies"
MAGAZINE SPREAD IMAGES - POST EDITING
After looking at magazines such as "Little White Lies", we knew that that sort of niche magazine would be right for
our movie. Pictures in niche magazines such as "Little White Lies" are
usually edited mildly to look a little more edgy etc. We decided to
change the saturation of the images and go for a sort of greyscale-esque
style just like our initial magazine spread layout.
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TUTORIAL: WHAT WE DID IN PHOTOSHOP
We started by using the "Levels" tool on photoshop to adjust the right amount of Brightness and Contrast. We then used the "Hue & Saturation" tool to minimize the colours on the image. This way it looks more classy, edgier and is more likely to be in a magazine such as "Little White Lies".
With the second sideprofile we did the same as with the first one. We used the "Levels" and "Hue & Saturation" tools to achieve the effect we were looking for.
For the interview still of both of us ,we edited in a similiar way to the portraits but instead of using the "Hue & Saturation" tool to cut down on the colours, we decided to go all the way and used the "Black & White"- Tool. Other tools we used were again the "Levels"- Tool to adjust brightness and contrast plus the Filter selection "Lens Distraction" to add a subtle vignette around the image.
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TUTORIAL: WHAT WE DID IN PHOTOSHOP
We started by using the "Levels" tool on photoshop to adjust the right amount of Brightness and Contrast. We then used the "Hue & Saturation" tool to minimize the colours on the image. This way it looks more classy, edgier and is more likely to be in a magazine such as "Little White Lies".
With the second sideprofile we did the same as with the first one. We used the "Levels" and "Hue & Saturation" tools to achieve the effect we were looking for.
For the interview still of both of us ,we edited in a similiar way to the portraits but instead of using the "Hue & Saturation" tool to cut down on the colours, we decided to go all the way and used the "Black & White"- Tool. Other tools we used were again the "Levels"- Tool to adjust brightness and contrast plus the Filter selection "Lens Distraction" to add a subtle vignette around the image.
Thursday, 26 January 2012
MAGAZINE SPREAD IMAGES - SHOT SELECTION
Having done the Mock-up of our Magazine Review already, today we did the photoshoot for the actual magazine spread itself.
Set & Props
We took the pictures in the photography studio of our school. We used the Studio Lighting and delibaretly chose to show the studio set on the pictures creating a sort of more casual atmosphere trough not actually shooting editorial-esque pictures. This gives the picture a sense of a proper reportage due to us being in a professional surrounding but being more or less inbetween takes. Using a Tripod and a Canon DSL, we took various shots of both Christabel and me talking, single portraits and side portraits in order for us to have a variety of pictures to choose from.
Editing Process
We uploaded the pictures to our computers, opened them in Bridge and made two selections in total.
The first screencap shows all the pictures plus our favourites which are
highlighted with the green label. The second screencap shows our
broader selection and the screencap below shows our final selection of
pictures we want to use in our magazine spread.
Set & Props
We took the pictures in the photography studio of our school. We used the Studio Lighting and delibaretly chose to show the studio set on the pictures creating a sort of more casual atmosphere trough not actually shooting editorial-esque pictures. This gives the picture a sense of a proper reportage due to us being in a professional surrounding but being more or less inbetween takes. Using a Tripod and a Canon DSL, we took various shots of both Christabel and me talking, single portraits and side portraits in order for us to have a variety of pictures to choose from.
Editing Process
Tuesday, 24 January 2012
SHOT LIST - WHY DID BEN COLLINS HAVE TO DIE
Shot List
SCENE 1.2 (Vox Pop)
Medium Close Up – 5 different people.
6-7 seconds.
Question and answer.
SCENE 2 (Charlotte interview)
Medium Shot 45 seconds
SCENE 2.1 (OUTSIDE THE SCHOOL GATES)
Interviewer hiding spying on Charlotte and Tom who are talking about Ben.
Handheld- start further out and move in closer throughout conversation.
Subtitles
Voices get louder while you move in.
Duration: 30 Seconds
Shot Type: Handheld
SCENE 3 (Personal tutor)
Duration: 45 Seconds
SCENE 4 – Mothers door shut on interviewer.
Duration: 10-12 seconds
Shot Type: Handheld one interviewer holding camera while other interviewer knocks on the door
SCENE 5- Interview with Tom
Duration: 50 seconds
Shot Type: Medium Shot
SCENE 6- Doctors office
Duration: 30 seconds
Shot Type: Medium shot
SCENE 7- Mother’s monologue
Duration: 50 seconds
Shot Type: Medium towards Medium Close Up
POSTER SHOOT - SHOOTING PLAN
A rough plan and collection of ideas for the shooting of our official movie poster. We brainstormed things such as Equipment, Costumes and generally needed Props.
- Gels
Equipment
- Lights
- Studio
- Camera (Nikon/Canon DSL)
- Tripod- Gels
Costume (ideas)
- White shirt and cardigan
- Collared t-shirt
- Glasses
- Gelled hair
- Skinny jeans
- Tracksuit bottoms
- Rugby shirt
Props
- Rugby ball
- Football
- Pen
- A*
- Prefect badge
VISUAL EXAMPLES OF DOCUMENTARY CONVENTIONS
Before actually shooting our documentary/mockumentary, we went trough various documentaries to establish visual examples of common documentary conventions. Below, there is a few examples.
This is a visual example of a voice over - Adolescent Suicide by Mattew Oquendo
This is a visual example of a Interview documentary -
This is a visual example of archival footage in a documentary -
This is a visual example of a montage sequence -
A visual example of the exposition of a documentary -
Tuesday, 17 January 2012
MAGAZINE MOCK-UPS
Before creating our actual magazine spreads, we tried around InDesign and created two different Mock-Ups in order to establish what kind of layout we want to use for our own article. The first layout is quite a simple one with a small range on different colours, appealing to a more niche and arty kind of magazine such as "Little White Lies". The second spread is aimed at a more mainstream magazine, using more colours, different shapes and sizes and less text in order to appeal to that kind of magazine readers.
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TUTORIAL: WHAT WE DID IN INDESIGN
First, we created a new InDesign file and made a double site spread. We started of with choosing the background colour. As this spread is aimed at a more arty magazine, we didn't want anything to vivid and distracting but didnt want to leave it white either. We choose to go for a greyish creamy mix. In order to set this as the Background colour, we created a large "Content Frame", and used the "Swatches" option to create our colour. Then we arranged the "Content Frame" to be set in the back of the page in order for us to be able to put the article on top. We continued by looking for a picture online that we could use as a Director's portrait. Then, we created tree columns and using the various grid's InDesign has to offer, we sized them all the same and justified the text within them.
We proceeded by adding a heading and a subtitle. We decreased the tint of the subtitles as we wanted it to look subtle and didnt want it to distract from the heading or the picture. In order for the double spread page not to look too plain and boring, we went trough the various available fonts and changed from "Arial" to "Times New Roman" for the columns and "Trebuchet" for the Heading. The last step in creating this double spread was to find another picture of our fictional director and to put it on the page at the right. We choose another black & white image to maintain the sort of contemporary and classy vibe of the previous page.
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TUTORIAL: WHAT WE DID IN INDESIGN
For the second doublespread page, we decided to use an female director. Again, we started by setting the background colour. Again, we used a "Content Frame" and the "Swatches" option to choose a colour of our choice and set it over the two pages. We then arranged it to be in the back again. As opposed to our first layout, we decided to keep the director's picture in colour and also had a more colourful approach on the rest of the page. Using a "Text Frame" and the "Swatches" we created the Heading of the pages, maintaining blue as the dominant colour on the page, but colouring the Heading in Red and yellow in order for a more vivid and quirky vibe.
We continued by creating a few columns with an place holder text. We again, justified the text and edited various parts of it to make it look more like an interview. We did so by bolding various parts and leaving the "answers" in regular writing. Then, to finish this double spread, we created a stroke and a different background for the text columns, using the colours red and white in order to stay insync with the colours previously used on the Page.
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